I remember handing you a small paper of my drawing secretly... Before you got into the plane...
So that I could make sure, you would think of me more everyday...
I remember you calling me your golden daughter...
Even though I was nothing special than other girls... Except that I'm born to you...
I remember you turning and tossing whole night restlessly...
Just because I had a small headache...
I remember you waiting for me outside our home...
So that you could give me a heart warming smile when I return from school...
I remember your voice trembling with sadness for being angry to me...
Even though it was entirely my fault...
I remember you talking to me showing no pain in the hospital bed...
When I knew you were having a hard time...
I pray to God to give me one more chance...
So that I could tell you how much I love you more than anyone...
How great a father were you to me...
How great a life you have given me...
I thank God...for making me your golden daughter...
I pray everyday...wherever you are, may you be happy...
I pray to God... to help us all meet in Heaven...
I pray to God...that my home with my family is the Heaven I wish to have...
I remain strong... I remain positive...
But when I saw the small paper I handed you seventeen years ago... In your suitcase you used to carry everyday...
I couldn't stop my tears...
But I knew then...that I was always loved and remembered by you... The whole time of your life...
And I knew...it was a gesture from God... Showing me...to do good deeds...
So that I can meet you one day...
And I'm waiting for that beautiful morning...
When I open my eyes and see your face...
With a heart warming smile...
I want to talk to you the whole day...
I want to tell you how terribly I missed you all these years........
Nice one.. itz really touching!
ReplyDeleteI do not know whether this write up you posted here is a part of fiction or real life. Whatever it may be, it a beautiful write up. I guess it is also your first write up eh?
ReplyDeleteJust loved this :)
It was real life. No fiction.. Its my first write-up viewable to public (people other than juz me.)
ReplyDeleteI had a big feeling that this scribble was real. My heart just yearned so badly that i had to call up my Uppa and Umma just to feel it ease.
ReplyDeleteSuch was the beauty of this scribble. KEYS OF MIND indeed
I hope you called them. :) Maybe you can give them a hi from me, let me take a small credit for reminding you of them for a few moments. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifull it is :)))) God Bless U..
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ReplyDeleteBeatufil expression of LOVE.
ReplyDeleteThank god, this is the your second write up which I have read. Atleast this time, I did not have to open My dictionary or give a big Intellectual THOUGHT!!!
Thougt of reading from last to first :)
May the Almighty give you the the honour of joining your dad and noble company of our beloved Prophet(Pbuh) in the hereafter--aameen.
Thank you so much for the wishes and prayers.. Aameen.. :)
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